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针对“我有什么办法摆脱中式英语作文以及随之而来的英文语法错误呢？”笔者常回答考生此类问题。
第一、告诉考生学生“一表三图三方法六优化”是什么东西，它指：一表=英语词语搭配规则表；三图=逻辑英语写作思路图+递进式逻辑英语写作图+逻辑英语写作操作四步骤图；三方法=一因多果法+多因一果法+多因多果法；六优化=“2.66”逻辑+“5.38”逻辑单句+6个句型之变形法。
第二、让考生学生看一下，用“一表三图三方法六优化”法，写作英语作文如下：
Dear editor，
I LI Hua as one of readers write you a letter sending you a article on such a“how to understand Chinese-tradition culture”topic as you asked for comments reader would make.
So greatly does it turn people favorable for protecting a variety of Chinese culture traditionally, I feel, that as one of readers I will become one of its inheritors generation by generation.
This brings me to tell more Chinese people or foreign friends possibly about working hard at being men or women of wide culture, according to the well-established tradition in China.
Following the Chinese tradition, the friendly relation has been set up between people and nature harmoniously, and between them on communication equally, having been got so developed at present that it will be done in future at home and abroad.
***bove-mentioned viewpoint I would make known to you as well as all-China people or some foreigners. By that I am benefiting a lot, in the belief that they shall work hard at doing everything they could, in making China great again throughout a little more than 5000-year history and helping China grow stronger days to come in future.
Most people will often have revelation acquired from above culture, which would be love of Chinese lives. They, whose great spirit together with its mission is set in mind, remain true with the original aspiration.
That inspires them to join a highly-cultured activity in protecting traditional culture of China to develop culturally or mentally or intellectually.
Yours, Li Hua
上述英语作文是依据以下条件写作的
假定你是李华，最近China Daily就“如何看待中国传统文化”面向社会征稿。请你用英语给编辑写一封信，谈谈你自己的想法。要点如下：（1）表明自己的立场（传统文化应该得到保护和传承）；（2）给出你的理由；（3）呼吁全社会共同参与。注意：（1）词数100左右；（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；（3）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：传承inherit
根据上述英语作文可以看出：
这篇文章结构完整、传统文化内容叙述清晰、细节和过渡得当。内容令读者融于英语作文中的“人物背景”之中。英语思维逻辑写作及其词句毫无“模板、套句痕迹”，所以无废词废句。这样有助于考试英语写作获最佳英语写作“常青树”奖。
与此相比较，看一下模板套作写中式英语作文如下：
Dear editor，
I'm writing to you to talk about my opinions about traditional Chinese culture. I think it's necessary for us to protect and inherit it. Here are some reasons.
Firstly, as one of the ancient civilizations in the world, the traditional Chinese culture is the foundation of the development of our country, and it can provide spiritual motivation for Chinese economy.
Secondly, it includes many inspiring and shocking events, through which we can learn some useful things to make our country develop more quickly.
Last but not least, it is an important part of Chinese history, and inheriting it may make us stronger and benefit our growth. I hope Chinese government and citizens join in the campaign of protecting and inheriting traditional Chinese culture.
We should make contributions and efforts to carry it forward.
Yours, Li Hua
这篇中式英语看出存在“逻辑断层”夹杂着“模板、套作”痕迹。所以说使用“一表三图三方法六优化”方法，就显得必要和极为重要了。这是因为英语为母语的人，都把各个英语句子词法或句子架构都已固定为正确的了，无须我们考生再把写作单词“重新组合了”。
假如考生自己把单词重新组合很有可能按中文思维句子顺序组合成英语句子，所以就出现语法错误了。由此我们使用英语为母语的人已固定为正确的“现成的句子架构即句型”，英文语法自然正确无错误了。
用“一表三图三方法六优化”技术工具可以正确地完成英语写作，因此改变了千人、万人用一个‘模板’面孔写英语的状况。由此想写多少篇不重样原创的英语就能写出多少篇。让想写英语的人，熟练书写出内容清晰、逻辑连贯、原创英语的梦想成真——写出的英语成为‘优、精、佳、美’之作品。
总结：
用“一表三图三方法六优化”技术工具完成英语写作，既摆脱“没词儿写，有了词儿不知怎么写”避免中式英语作文的困扰，又增强“作文审题不漏；论据过渡不丢；观点逻辑跑不走”的能力。
这样帮助考生牢牢掌控英语写作“三宝”： ⑴谋篇布局三步骤、由词到句指南图、有效亮点组合表、变形金刚挖金句； ⑵句子内容进行调，依据逻辑来推敲；⑶过渡句段助通畅，脑筋必须常思量。
这又鼓舞考生们突破了“使用词类范围小，句子结构种类少”的局限，也达到“因果推理中再寻因果推理”之目标：每个原因或结果句子，再用逻辑句、逻辑短语或逻辑标志词等，那么英语思维逻辑写作方法熟练了带动水平自然升，便把英语思维逻辑写作技能扎根于英语写作考生心目中。
由此“学习英语写作，不靠模板靠逻辑”摆脱中式英语写作之难题，因此便迎刃而解了。
所以对考生学生说：高分向你招手！写作英语，用“一表三图三方法六优化”干掉低分的模板套作写英语！
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